AT: Finn the Ice Prince Comic

I love Finn as the Ice Prince! So, I decided to make a comic! I used some of the lyrics from Avril Lavigne's song, "Nobody's Home" and I tweaked them just a little to fit the idea. (I replaced "she" and "her" with "he" and "him.") Tell me what you think or how I can improve! Thanks!

Finn and Adventure Time belong to Pendleton Ward and Cartoon Network

"Nobody's Home" belongs to Avril Lavigne (I don't own the character, show, or song.)

Btw, if you can't read what the comic is saying, here it is:

"He wants to go home.... But nobody's home.... That's where he lies, Broken inside.... With no place to go, No place to go.... To dry his eyes, Broken inside.... Open your eyes.... And look outside, Find the reasons why.... You've been rejected.... And now you can't find, What you've left behind."